Day 1: Peer Conferencing

I think I found the entire peer revision process helpful. Based off the College Essay rubric I feel as though I can look specifically on what I need to improve on in my essay. Especially getting feedback from someone other than myself is very helpful. I also feel that my peer editor was able to help me direct my focus better onto specific values and overall help fix the flow of my essay. I feel a lot more comfortable heading into the next steps of my essay if I had not done the peer conferencing. Although there are still parts of my essay I feel like I need to work on, I know generally speaking, which parts need more work than others. I look to continue to make my essay flow the best it can while keeping an interesting story.